Mishu's murder is just the beginning of Bri's troubles, as Dirken continues to terrorize the dimensions. Or is it really Dirken at all...?

Page 2. Chapter 1.

31 May 2006 02:55 am

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Author's Comments:

UglyKitten, 31 May 2006 03:07 am

I still don't like how Bri's back turned out in the second-to-last panel. >< I think she ended up looking a little less like herself, and the pose STILL looks wonky. The final panel of Mishu turned out exactly the way I wanted it to. ^-^ Well, the blood could have been done better...but nonetheless, I like it. ^-^

User's Comments:

Abt_Nihil, 31 May 2006 09:33 am

I like the art and composition... really gets the sadness across.

Dai (Guest), 23 Jun 2006 07:02 pm

Yeah, I have to agree with you about the back pose, but still, the overall image is really nice. Yeah, the blood could be better, but it's still really good. ^______^ (BTW, you should do a few filler color pages...I lvoe those in some mangas. XD)

Wrath (Guest), 10 Jul 2006 12:47 am

It really touched a chord in me, since I recently lost my own best friend... I am sure you know what I mean from the TP boards... But, I think the layout is really good...*envious*

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