Author's Comments:

UglyKitten, 02 Jun 2006 07:14 pm

That BG definitely did not go as planned...X.x And it looks like I have some touching up to do on the dagger. >< Why didn't the whole thing come out? I hope this makes sense...Bri is looking up at Blank (the one in the nifty outfit with the jewel on her chest). Blank is aptly named, because her face always looks blank. See?

User's Comments:

Dai (Guest), 23 Jun 2006 07:01 pm

Gah, the neck bothers me. o_o; Just the entire pose of the head bothers me. I can't exactly point out why...but it does. X______X Hm...I'll think about it, then come back to this.

Wrath (Guest), 10 Jul 2006 12:48 am

Yes, the big neck bugs me as well...*draws skinny necks*

TheBohemian, 12 Jul 2006 09:44 am

Ok, I was re-reading what you have to get to your update, and I cam across this one again. And realised the neck DID bother me. I don't think it's the proportions, though, the thickness of the neck is good, and the angle of the face is right. So I couldn't figure it out.
At least until I did a sketch of it. I think if you angled the neck a bit more, so it's more of a diagonal, it would work. A little more arch to the back of it, too. Also, a fold or two under chin would emphasise the angle of the head, making it a little less awkward . I think.
Anyhoo, I'll e-mail you the pic later to show you what I mean. Whee! for fan-art! =)

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