Author's Comments:

UglyKitten, 19 Jun 2006 11:55 pm

Continuing on... Despite my carpal tunnel, I've decided to continue on. I just have to take it easier. X__X Owwww...I shouldn't have drawn QUITE as long as I did today, though. At any rate, this concludes my prologue/first chapter. Next is filler (which automatically will update tomorrow at midnight) and then I have a cover and first page of the second chapter done. ^-^ Aren't I so good? NOT. T__T I'm already behind schedule...

User's Comments:

holyknight, 19 Jun 2006 11:59 pm

this is really good!

YamPuff (Guest), 21 Jun 2006 12:47 pm

I love the panelling here...it might well be my fave page so far. ^^ keep up teh good work! But go easy on your wrist.

Dai (Guest), 24 Jun 2006 06:19 pm

The blotting of the blood on Mishu looks....weird? But still, nice. :)

Dai (Guest), 01 Jul 2006 11:18 pm

Aiya....><: The wings don't look quite right...o_o;

TheBohemian, 12 Jul 2006 09:51 am

I think a little less space between the abstract panels would make this page a little more interesting, and add a touch more drama to it. Until he last panel, all the gutters are evenly spaced, which doesn't add much except to separate the panels.
Say if you halved the distance between the second and third panels, and half that again between the thrid and fourth...
Do you see what I mean? Cause I'm bad at explaining this... =/

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