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Keduc, 04 Jul 2006 09:05 am

Very Good Work So far, I am enjoying it. You are very good at developing character emotion. I am a decent story teller, but my own artwork is limited. I'll keep reading to see what happens next. Don't be discouraged. You're good at this.

chaos dragoon (Guest), 05 Jul 2006 02:53 pm

It's flowing nicely!

TheBohemian, 12 Jul 2006 10:20 am

Your panel lay-out is PEEFECT on this page!!
Compostions are good, with the possible exception of the third panel; if it's a big deal to put the hand on her shoulder, make it more emphatic: change the angle, and throw in some speed lines.

UglyKitten, 13 Jul 2006 02:57 am

Really? I think the space between Tien's eye and Lexis's "let's think a minute here..." moment was too wide. >_< And then I did the stupid pencils-mixup AGAIN!!! Her hand was supposed to be on the opposite shoulder!

And what the heck happened to this pages tones? Only one came through! X__X Something is messed up here...I had speedlines around Bri, and the some mood-dots on her, too...nya...*kicks computer*

TheBohemian, 17 Jul 2006 02:27 pm

S'alright, it works this way; if you HADN'T mixed it up, the hand prolly would've gotten buried under the balloon.

XxIntegralEinxX, 30 Nov 2006 12:01 pm

HOMG!! BRIDGET!! THATS ME! xDD no its not..but its my name...sweet xD

Loving this comic ^^

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