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Wrath (Guest), 10 Jul 2006 01:00 am

I like the close up on the side view eye... Something I cannot draw very well...

TheBohemian, 12 Jul 2006 10:30 am

Good page, still lovin the flow of your story.
The neck in the third page looks a bit off; the neck is supposed to be tilted, right? But the neck is still positioned as if she's standing straight up.
The floor...hm... I like the design, but it's out of perspective. I think the swirls should be at the present spacing at the bottom of the panel, but the deeper you go in the hall, they should be packed in real close together, so that it almost looks like the floor is covered in swirls.
The thing is, this would throw the focus off the dimension transfer(?) where it should be. In that case, fade out the floor swirls right around the transfer, like a flashlight in pitch black, if ye follow me.

And I see you have a lot more line variation in your work; you've come a long way in so short a time!!!

UglyKitten, 13 Jul 2006 03:02 am

Gyaaaaa! *chokes Lex* It's driving me craaaazy, this! Where is my camera?? T_T...I need my references...

I used a basic shoujo tone technique on the floor...but it didn't work. X_X Did the same thing with the cobblestones earlier, and it worked. I think it didn't work because of the really, really weird angle that I used. X_X

I take almost all crit I get to heart because I rarely get such awesome quality ones...thank you so much, Bohemian! ^__^

TheBohemian, 17 Jul 2006 02:25 pm

You're very welcome. =)

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