Author's Comments:

UglyKitten, 15 Jul 2006 03:40 am

AHA! For those of you who read my LJ, this is the page that I walked you through each step of my process on. So, of course, ya'll recognize it! I know...the panel arrangement was horrible on this. >_< Domo sumimasen!

On the last page, this one, and the next, you'll see just how often Jirkle changes face--it's like he has a different mood every five seconds! Jirk was based on my idea of the perfect guy--a few quirks here and there, but still a lot of soul and enthusiasm. You'll hear about romance a lot in this story, but it'll mostly be angst--Bri is so indecisive...she can't choose between four hot bishonen, after all! (Who are the others? You'll have to wait to find out who they ALL are...but I think it's safe to say that there's Jirkle (halfling--half fire, half bat), an Ocelot demon, an angel, and a half-demon.

You'll also notice that the shelf behind Jirk is extremely detailed (far more than most of my BG have been so far). This is because Jirk's shelf is very important...and because I seriously need to work more on BG. ^^;

User's Comments:

jma5448 (Guest), 22 Jul 2006 01:16 pm

Wow this has some really good art but it seems your copying Winx a little.. or is it witch? hmmm forgot

UglyKitten, 23 Jul 2006 05:12 am

...who? o.0 I am the clueless on what that is. I copy from nowhere. This story has been in me head for seven years. XD

TheBohemian, 24 Jul 2006 06:30 pm

The perspective on te shelf looks a little off, especially when you see the perspective of the chair.

Have you checked out Tentopet's perspective tutorials? Or I think Pop Mhan has a pretty good system he explains on his forums... =/

UglyKitten, 24 Jul 2006 11:42 pm

Well, it's supposed to look like everything's about ready to fall off of the shelf...there's way too much stuff up there. >_< I don't think I succeeded.

TheBohemian, 07 Aug 2006 05:24 pm

Oh. Then in that case, well-done! =)

Rain (Guest), 24 Sep 2006 01:45 am

I like that some detail has appeared in the scene!
detail detail!

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