Mishu's murder is just the beginning of Bri's troubles, as Dirken continues to terrorize the dimensions. Or is it really Dirken at all...?

Chapter 2, Pg 12.

02 Aug 2006 12:00 am

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Author's Comments:

UglyKitten, 30 Jul 2006 04:07 am

I could have SWORN I'd fixed her eye...no matter. >.< That whole panel looks wrong anyway. I will prolly expand on what Bri's saying later on, so I feel no need to explain it right this second.

The last page was a tad confusing, now that I look at it...I was too distracted by the itty bitty kitties. XP Basically, Jirkle's saying that Bri has basically elliminated ALL of Dirken's allies. And now, we find out, Jirkle was once Dirken's ally.

(No, I didn't actually mean for their names to be that close. Gomen! I've been calling them that too long to choose a different name for either. >.<)

There's that blasted plate again! XD

And...is it pretty clear from the last two panels that Bri doesn't care if she lives or dies because of Mishu? I thought I'd be smart and make it visual instead, but...did it work?

User's Comments:

Rain (Guest), 24 Sep 2006 01:50 am

I feel so lost right now....
I understand that jirkle was talking the whole time, but that page with the kittens really made it feel like a change of scene, and then the topic of conversation changed so quickly too...
Maybe a good way to study would be to read play scripts?