...I. LOATHE. This page. But I really couldn't imagine any other way to show that it was shrinking...and changinc...and becoming, for lack of a better word, cute and victim-like.
And Bri is quite right, really. This was a set-up. By whom, you ask? Well...I don't rightly know if you'll ever find out, actually. XD
No offence UK, but just let your pages speak for themselves. All this teasing about the story ("Why is she wearing suspenders instead of a belt? You'll have to wait to find out!...or maybe you won't.") can get tiresome. The story should be able to tell itself, and it's doing a good job of it so far.
The demon's still cool, even when shrunk and victaimfied (?).
^^; Sorry...I like to tease, and often enough I hate having to hold back what goes on in the rest of the story. ^^; I'm terrible at keeping secrets. But honestly enough...o.0 We...never actually found out who set her up, even in the novel (which goes all the way to three chapters to the end...). Mainly because I never found a way to stick it into the plot. ^^;;;; I'm a bad writer. .__.