Author's Comments:

UglyKitten, 28 Aug 2006 04:24 am

...And, chapter close. ^_^ Bri finally got up the nerve to kiss him back. Which...as you can see, Jirk is a bit stunned by. XD

User's Comments:

MetraWorley, 10 Sep 2006 12:34 am

Overall, very good work. Your artwork is clean and delibrate. Your pacing bothered me. Too many characters are introduced too quickly and the story moves too fast to follow easily.

If hurried, it seems to be an interesting plotline so far. Nice work.

Rain (Guest), 24 Sep 2006 01:56 am

er... I'd say he looks more put-off than stunned.... ^^;

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