Author's Comments:

UglyKitten, 20 Sep 2006 02:45 am

Is the pacing okay on this page? o.o I wasn't really sure how to go about this...>.<

User's Comments:

Sidheprincezzz, 27 Sep 2006 12:26 pm

good pacing (...at least i think so)
just one little thingy, i think that maybe you should make the table in third panle a little lower... it looks slightly off. i have trouble with furniture, so no big deal!
over all, wonderfull page. :)

Silvarea (Guest), 29 Dec 2006 03:29 am

In the second panel both girls look alike to me so much so as to be twins. yes one has long hair but their features are so similar and I have no idea which of the two is in the close up..
the page pacing is great and so is the layout

What is that cute creature sleeping on the sofa!

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